Darkravenrose

Hey hun. Honestly I'm loving the dialogue in between the two. You really have a knack for forming Shadows thoughts into words. No easy thing to do. And I love the part where Amy squeaks because she is so pissed off. Angry Hedgehog noises LOL. As for the argument being drawn out more I think that's a high probability because we both know they are both stubborn as he**. And with Amy being so upset at this point it kind of makes her easy prey for shadow to move on. But on the other hand Shadow is freaked out which is kind of hard to do I think. I don't know if he wants to have respect for Amy? It sounds like he does but then Instinct takes over and he ruins the moment. So it's kind of up in the air I can definitely see it being drawn out more. Amy hasn't hit rock bottom and I don't think Shadow is ready to completely leave her alone without giving her something to remember him by. So is always been up to you as a creator of the comic I hope that I touched on a few things for you. I would definitely say draw out and spicy because let's face it everybody likes drama especially Hedgehog drama. But this is perfectly good if you decide to leave it as is. I love the direction that it's going.